Take me there alone
Oh dear
To a place
On this planet of love.
Where the seas never
Bathed me naked
like my mum in the bath tub.
To a place
Where the forests never
Shaded my bare skin
With their towel of shade.
To a place
Where the buds never
Looked at my face
Envy at their blooming heart.
To a place
Where the winds
never heard my name
with so sweet a tone.
To a place
where the eyes
never saw my face,
full of beauty and elegance.
To a place
Where nobody sees us
Within embraces bared
Nobody hears us
With heartbeats shared
Nobody to dare
Feel us there
Only you, and your heart
me and mine,
and us.
Take me to a place where I could kiss you again and again under the full moon in the cool spring breeze coming from gardens of fragrant flowers...
Subash, I am one day going to steal your take me to a place' phrase and write a longer poem including the stanza I already posted here. Happy poetry writings!
Thank you Ravi for your eternal awareness and concern for poets like us, your reading and remarks in poetic form ever inspires.
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I would like to translate this poem
Within embraces bared Nobody hears us With heartbeats shared sir beautiful lyrical quality wish you10 10++++++
Ranjan I agree with you lovely poem