Song Of The Blue Lagoon: - 01: A Honeymoon Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Song Of The Blue Lagoon: - 01: A Honeymoon

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Take me there alone

Oh dear

To a place

On this planet of love.


Where the seas never

Bathed me naked

like my mum in the bath tub.


To a place

Where the forests never

Shaded my bare skin

With their towel of shade.


To a place

Where the buds never

Looked at my face

Envy at their blooming heart.



To a place

Where the winds

never heard my name

with so sweet a tone.


To a place

where the eyes

never saw my face,

full of beauty and elegance.


To a place

Where nobody sees us

Within embraces bared

Nobody hears us

With heartbeats shared

Nobody to dare

Feel us there

Only you, and your heart

me and mine,

and us.

Song Of The Blue Lagoon: - 01: A Honeymoon
Saturday, December 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art,love and dreams,love and friendship,wedding
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 17 December 2017

Within embraces bared Nobody hears us With heartbeats shared sir beautiful lyrical quality wish you10 10++++++

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Rajendra Rout 05 May 2018

Ranjan I agree with you lovely poem

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Ravi Kopra 16 December 2017

Take me to a place where I could kiss you again and again under the full moon in the cool spring breeze coming from gardens of fragrant flowers...

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Ravi Kopra 16 December 2017

Subash, I am one day going to steal your take me to a place' phrase and write a longer poem including the stanza I already posted here. Happy poetry writings!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 16 December 2017

Thank you Ravi for your eternal awareness and concern for poets like us, your reading and remarks in poetic form ever inspires.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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