Friday, August 24, 2007

Song Of The Narrow Road Comments

Rating: 5.0

His melancholy song began exceeding its limits.
In those days he used to sing the same old song:
'Why these ears, hey! If they do not hear? '
Old man is crying for help.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 01 September 2007

A wistful piece filled with melancholy and remembrances of the past. Yet never a word wasted. Wonderful poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Duncan Wyllie 28 August 2007

Sad yet beautifully put together Nimal, there is always so much emotion in your writes Thankyou for sharing this Love duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 24 August 2007

Your melancholy song resonates. You and I seem to have an affinity with shadows and shadows speak a language all their own. You are writing so well. It is a pleasure to comment. Encore! Warmest regards, Sandra

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