Songs Of Life (Tanka)- 03 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Songs Of Life (Tanka)- 03

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Moments spent halfway on the door,

Tears shed silent, wetted my floor,

In nights, that seemed so long

On paths, that proved so wrong

You disappeared, when life asked more.

Saturday, April 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lifestyle,love and friendship,sad love,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sabita Sahoo 30 June 2018

In nights, that seemed so long On paths, that proved so wrong You disappeared, when life asked more. Wow so poetic, so nice rhyming with feelings of a reader's heart. 10++++++

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Anuranjita Ghadei 01 May 2018

I love the essence of the lovely poem shared here. Thanks for the sharing. 10+++

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Thanks dear Fiza for the beautiful remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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