Nights now, seem so long
In this moonshine on the same hills.
The Other nights with you
The frozen time draped over the miles,
The autumn breeze unfurled dunes of smiles.
Subhas Chandra Chakra! ! ! ! ! I love this series of Tankas- -they are revealing a very poetic romantic side of you. This is soooooooooooooooooo smooth that a singer could croon it easily. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Wow dear friend Susan. You can fill life in a dead object through your loving words. You are the only friend in this universe for me, whose words invoke poetic elegance in me that lingers for weeks. Thanks a million for such a wonderful remark, so carefully knitted. Regards. Subhas
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The frozen time draped over the miles, The autumn breeze unfurled dunes of smiles. Such a highly creative moment draped with your so carefully chosen words. I love it so so much. Thanks dear poet for this poem shared. 1000+++++