Sonnet 116. (Translation) . Poem by Michael Walker

Sonnet 116. (Translation) .

Que je n'admette pas d'obstacles au mariage
Des vrais esprits. L'Amour n'est pas l'amour
Qui se change quand il trouve du changement,
Ou se penche avec celui qui s'enleve a enlever.


Oh, non c'est un amer toujours fixe,
Qui regarde des tempetes et n'est jamais agite;
C'est l'etoile a tous les navires errants,
Dont le valeur n'est pas connu, bien qu'on puisse estimer sa taille.


L'Amour n'est pas la dupe du Temps, quoique des levres et des joues
roses
Soient compris sous la portee de sa faucille pliee;
L'Amour ne se change pas pendant ses heures et ses semaines breves,
Mais l'endure meme au bord de la ruine.


Si ceci est faux, et prouve a moi-meme,
Je n'ecris jamais, ni aucun homme n'aimait jamais.


- 'Sonnet 116. William Shakespeare. (1564-1616) .
From 'Complete Works of William Shakespeare', Edited by Anthony Burgess and Germaine Greer et al., p.1380.

Monday, April 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: change,love,sonnet
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is interesting to compare 'Sonnet 116' with 'Breath of a Rose', by Langston Hughes. Both poems are about the nature and qualities of love, considered generally. Hughes concentrates on the beauty of love, its fragility and its lasting only a short time-then love is gone.
Shakespeare writes of love as permanent, steadfast, and never-changing in different situations. Love is 'the marriage of true minds'. It is like having one love for life, being faithful.
On reflection, both Hughes and Shakespeare are right in different ways. Some men, like Hughes himself, have many different girlfriends and partners, going from one to another. Some men get married six or seven times in a life-time. This sort of love with different partners is real for many people and is a valid, legitimate lifestyle today and in Hughes's time. Probably all times.
Shakespeare is right because he is focussing on men who have one lover for life; They are faithful and happy with one partner. They may well be married, having taken vows to each other, but may be just 'partners'. This latter is very common today.
Shakespeare invented the sonnet type named after him: 14 lines divided into 3 quatrains and a final couplet. In this sonnet, the rhyme scheme is: abab/cdcd/efef/ gg. Very neat and planned, but still sounding natural.
Both poems are about the eternal topic of love, which is just as important today as in the sixteenth century. Which one is better is a matter of opinion, I think.
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