I lost my everything in some moments,
only my few words broke ur heart in fragments,
I know words that I say r not right,
and that's the cause of our fight,
I m sorry for what I have done,
partying away from u made me alone, not talking with u made me dead,
now I m laying n crying on my bed,
please don't give me this torturous pain,
all I want to be with u again,
please forgive me, my heart n my brain, and be a frnd once again.....
beautiful love poem, there is an overtone of regret pervades through out the whole poem, i enjoyed reading the poem, thanks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
please forgive me, my heart n my brain, and be a frnd once again..... beautiful expressions of a contrite heart. you are not proud that is why u write like this. a humble heart will hve the power to love more and more. God bless you. liked ur poem very much. tony
thnx...its my pleasure that u like my poem...: -)