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My Cry - Poem by the chinmay

About four years past, still ur memories not seems to last, My heart is remembering u and that every moments I spent with u, Now, trust me I will forget u, bcoz I come to know, u r not cmfrtble with me, and all I want, to see u happy, For ur happiness I can do anything, You don't need to say sorry, You don't need to worry, just follow ur heart, wherever he carry, And be with the person, who loves u so much, And now what's about me, Look I m still smiling, hey stop! not so deeply, bcoz if u look deeply in me, You find my tears which I m hiding, day by day, second per second I m dying, And u come to know-my smile is fake, and I m lying, and also the truth that I m crying, crying, CRYING.....

Comments about My Cry by the chinmay

  • Shahin Latif (12/20/2015 2:29:00 PM)

    Good ink! I enjoyed to read it. Thanks a lot & be well always. (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (11/17/2015 3:19:00 AM)

    just follow ur heart, wherever he carry, And be with the person, who loves u so much,

    yes just follow your heart. pray for the boldness to change the life and follow the heart without cry ing over the past experiences. life is much more than your past. lovely poem. tony
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    The chinmay (11/17/2015 8:36:00 AM)

    thnx a lot 4 encouraging me....ya u r right life is much more than past....but its not so easy....thnk u so much...

  • Vishal Sharma (11/13/2015 2:47:00 PM)

    abey mera title copy maar li bdw the poetry is by far better than mine (Report) Reply

    The chinmay (11/13/2015 11:01:00 PM)

    aapka title? ? ? oh sry mujhe bilkul bhi pta nh tha.....ur poetry is ur poetry.. no can compare to it

  • Bakuli Bhakali (11/13/2015 12:13:00 PM)

    nice one............! (Report) Reply

    The chinmay (11/13/2015 12:29:00 PM)

    thnk u

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/13/2015 7:02:00 AM)

    Wonderfully drafted about crying theme. This is definite and interesting. Wisely penned....10 (Report) Reply

    The chinmay (11/13/2015 10:22:00 AM)

    thnx a lot..

  • Souren Mondal (11/13/2015 6:35:00 AM)

    Relatable.. Thanks for sharing chinmay... (Report) Reply

    The chinmay (11/13/2015 10:22:00 AM)

    its my pleasure...

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 13, 2015

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