My Cry Poem by the chinmay

My Cry

Rating: 5.0


About four years past,
still ur memories not seems to last,
My heart is remembering u
and that every moments I spent with u,
Now, trust me I will forget u,
bcoz I come to know,
u r not cmfrtble with me,
and all I want, to see u happy,
For ur happiness I can do anything,
You don't need to say sorry,
You don't need to worry,
just follow ur heart, wherever he carry,
And be with the person, who loves u so much,
And now what's about me,
Look I m still smiling,
hey stop! not so deeply,
bcoz if u look deeply in me,
You find my tears which I m hiding,
day by day, second per second I m dying,
And u come to know-my smile is fake,
and I m lying, and also the truth that I m crying, crying, CRYING.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 13 November 2015

Relatable.. Thanks for sharing chinmay...

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Shahin Latif 20 December 2015

Good ink! I enjoyed to read it. Thanks a lot & be well always.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 November 2015

just follow ur heart, wherever he carry, And be with the person, who loves u so much, yes just follow your heart. pray for the boldness to change the life and follow the heart without cry ing over the past experiences. life is much more than your past. lovely poem. tony

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The chinmay 17 November 2015

thnx a lot 4 encouraging me....ya u r right life is much more than past....but its not so easy....thnk u so much...

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Vishal Sharma 13 November 2015

abey mera title copy maar li bdw the poetry is by far better than mine

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The chinmay 13 November 2015

aapka title? ? ? oh sry mujhe bilkul bhi pta nh tha.....ur poetry is ur poetry.. no can compare to it

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Bakuli Bhakali 13 November 2015

nice one............!

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The chinmay 13 November 2015

thnk u

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2015

Wonderfully drafted about crying theme. This is definite and interesting. Wisely penned....10

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The chinmay 13 November 2015

thnx a lot..

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