Soundless Smile Comments

We struggle in life with rough ground to travel as sometimes we fall beneath our sky holding our dreams as we face bravely with a soundless smile! Beautiful write!

a well written poem enjoyed very much

oh! you are so good...i am lost for words sir..you are brilliant

'A heavy fall, beneath the sky' I like these words and enjoeyd reading this poem. Excellent. Keep it up.

I loved the pen-picture very much.A good write!