Sparkle Poem by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

Sparkle

Rating: 5.0


Sparkle
Of my
Smile
Teardrops
On
Profile
Lingering
Lonesome
Light
Dusty
Dusk
Sterile
Journey
Never
Ends
Life's
Precarious
Bends
None
To hold
My hand
Alone
I still do
Stand
Nalini

Tuesday, May 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sad,sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nilima Deb 27 May 2016

Had a wonderful read! ! nice poetry with the art of wording.Excellent expression of the verse as well.10 out of 10

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Kishore Kumar Das 27 May 2016

Endured with sadness, you can sparkle.....lovely idea...in this connection, my poem ' lesson from a hibiscus' matches the frequency of your sparkling poem....

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Terry Craddock 25 May 2016

Hibernating Bear Happily Winter Den Sleeping falling cold raining heavily here so like a bear I am darkness retreating to hibernate in winter den sleeping to sleep in sweat summer dreams spring streams honey dripping eating upon migrating samon fish feeding safe from ice snow cold wind spine chill blows safe from ice hail pelting blizzards bitter banshee raging safe from severe storm high winds terror howling safe from ice snow cold wind blows safe from ice hail pelting blizzards bitter raging safe from severe storm high winds howling snow blast snow squall white out painting death in lost high mountain passess freezing safe in dreams of summer breeze embracing Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by my parting weather comment on the poem 'Sparkle' by the poet Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi. Dedicated to the poet Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi.

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Terry Craddock 24 May 2016

'Sparkle Of my Smile Teardrops On Profile' loved these first lines and the honesty of the confessional verse, feelings most feel endure too often in life 10+ cold raining heavily here, so like a bear I am retreating to hibernate in my den, but this does not mean I am not metaphorically here to hold your hand, drop bye say hi whenever you wish my friend :)

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