Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

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A Doctor's Dillema - Poem by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

A sick society gives rise to sick people
or vice versa, I still wonder
One woman is a home maker
While other is a home breaker
Today again
was my day of test
Faced it unprepared
at Almighty's behest
Yet another beautiful girl
a mother, a wife, a home maker
Brainwashed into submissive role
still domestic violence
has not killed her soul
How will I ever heal her pains
when my work entails dealing with
distress at physical plain
The maintaining cause as I now see
is that 'Other woman'
causing pains from adultery
The swellings and the scars
and the bruises in her heart
That torrent of painful tears
while her husband sat their
injuring her
with his insulting jeers.
Who gives men right to be monsters?
Who ever sanctioned their special status?
When all that such men do, is donate sperms
That also because its pleasure
They earn in return

Topic(s) of this poem: sad

Comments about A Doctor's Dillema by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

  • Siddartha MontikSiddartha Montik (12/5/2016 3:13:00 PM)

    sad truth and acreality of the world now! keen perception and expression of TRUE feelings. thank you for sharing. 10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Teddy Opundo (1/8/2015 1:49:00 AM)

    lovely wite, doctors are also human (Report)Reply

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  • Saadat TahirSaadat Tahir (7/31/2014 1:45:00 AM)

    heart felt lines...that portray the pain at many levels....
    as a doctor
    as a woman
    as a human

    the poems details the anguish in myriad details...nice lines


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  • Valsa GeorgeValsa George (6/11/2014 6:37:00 AM)

    I see your spirit revolting against men's tyranny and male chauvinism.... But all men are not alike! However, in general, women have been subservient to men and men tend to misuse their pysical prowess in inflicting pain on women! A great write! (Report)Reply

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  • Charles MonroeCharles Monroe (6/3/2014 12:05:00 AM)

    'The Patience of Patients'
    I the owner and the donor
    The patient inpatient.
    Single fatherhood in the hood
    There he stood,
    Mr. Miss-understood.
    Jagged from cock fights
    And guilt by association.
    Trying to father
    as much as he can muster.
    Little girl gives him
    'Happy Mother's Day' cards
    Made with crayon and ink.
    I am the proudest dad on
    Mother's Day;
    with no dilemmas at all.

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  • Colleen Courtney (5/9/2014 4:41:00 PM)

    Although not ALL men are cheats and shallow, it's been my experience...happy to remain single! But of course I do thank my daughters sperm donor! Lol. A beautiful, emotional poem. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 9, 2014

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