Special Poem by Teddy Wirunda

Special

Rating: 5.0


A brilliant shinning skin,
A wonderful black complexion,
No brown or white spot on my skin,
Fit for the black beauty competition
Aren't I special.

Hard, rouh, strong skin
Resembling my long lost kin
Good enough to be seen
But!
Rejected for a scene.

Thursday, September 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: acceptance,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 07 February 2018

Brilliant piece of poetry embellished in beautiful rhyme. Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Thanks for sharing Teddy and do remain enriched.

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Curtis Johnson 25 September 2015

Some of our fellow humans simply do not know the meaning of beauty. Nevertheless, the scenes continue to roll along, making your dream not only possible, but probable.

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Kinyua Karanja 25 September 2015

well coined, thanks for sharing.

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Fabrizio Frosini 24 September 2015

typos: shining / rough - - ''Rejected for a scene. '' :) nicely expressed WELCOME!

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