Teddy Abukasu


Special - Poem by Teddy Abukasu

A brilliant shinning skin,
A wonderful black complexion,
No brown or white spot on my skin,
Fit for the black beauty competition
Aren't I special.

Hard, rouh, strong skin
Resembling my long lost kin
Good enough to be seen
But!
Rejected for a scene.

Topic(s) of this poem: acceptance, love

Form: Cinquain


Comments about Special by Teddy Abukasu

  • Chinedu Dike (2/7/2018 8:56:00 PM)


    Brilliant piece of poetry embellished in beautiful rhyme. Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Thanks for sharing Teddy and do remain enriched. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/25/2015 3:25:00 PM)


    Some of our fellow humans simply do not know the meaning of beauty. Nevertheless, the scenes continue to roll along, making your dream not only possible, but probable. (Report) Reply

  • Kinyua Karanja (9/25/2015 4:23:00 AM)


    well coined, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Fabrizio Frosini (9/24/2015 2:07:00 PM)


    typos:
    shining / rough
    - -

    ''Rejected for a scene. '' :)
    nicely expressed
    WELCOME!
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 24, 2015



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