Saturday, May 11, 2013

Spectral Verses, Viii, Raise High The Curtain Of Your Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Astounding as the grimaced pain
that falls upon my breast
that turns within my soulful pleas
disturbing peaceful rest,
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Shahzia Batool 13 May 2013

Among all the pirate and non-pirate poems, i always tried to read between the lines and searched for truth as this poetry has duality of structure, the surface one is fun & frolic (fictitious) , and the thematic one invites the quest for truth...the regular readers might know well, so i don't agree with the following lines: Do not follow in my steps for you are prone to go astray, raise high the curtain of your dreams, don’t pause and look away.

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David Wood 12 May 2013

A deeply moving and profound poem that is very well penned.

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David Wood 12 May 2013

Another brilliant poem from the captain! It flows well.

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