Spinning.. Poem by Katrina Cinite

Spinning..

Rating: 5.0


Everything is spinning,
Spinning out of control,
And I don't know what to do,
Don't know if I want to know...

Just feeling like a endless spinning abyss,
Spinning out of control,
Feeling down in dark,
In the quiet insanity of roaring in my head..

But tears won't come when needed,
But words will say within,
But everybody are yelling,
But yout won't hear angels calling...

Until it's too late..
And all you can think about is..
One...

And then there will be a true silence..
And then there will be peace..
And then everybody will rejoice in the insanity that ends it all..
And the spinning will stop
And abyss will fade..

Just you and broken soul in your eyes..
On the way of still riddle for us all..
Be it in hot torture for damed
Be it in lightness of wonder,
Where angels sing and everything stops spinning...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vinod Kumar 12 April 2009

Good Tittle actually to placing straight and cross are clearly visible in it to tell the trouth in a different way, nice to read,10+

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 12 April 2009

the words are finely expressed and wonderful to read amazing

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Greenwolfe 1962 03 April 2009

I'm not sure whether the writer is talking to us or talking about herself. Either way, there is a darkness to this that must be removed. The writer says that death will end it, but I have seen such darkness end before. I wish the writer good luck if true. If not, I congratulate her on a very symbolic writing that was successful. Good title! GW62

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