Splendid Deception Poem by Ency Bearis

Splendid Deception

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Splendid you enchanted me
Splendid, trapped to your beauty
Splendid your lips to kiss
Splendid and such a bliss
Splendid with your physique
Splendid you use your body to speak with

But not splendid
what you did
You broke my heart
and broke my life apart
when you took all my money
Do you think its funny?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Karun 15 May 2010

nice poem. futility of life and love.. need for sincere and selfless love. very good idea. thank u for sharing

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 13 April 2010

From top of world and crash-landing on solid rock reality Love was a commerce commodity and in vogue… Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Lady Grace 30 March 2010

my goshhhhhhhhhhh... ''But not splendid what you did You broke my heart and broke my life apart when you took all my money Do you think its funny? ''..........waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....my goshhhhh, , , k, , nicely done ency dear...o, this poem makes us realize about trust, about love, about martyr...hope it will not happen to us.....

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