From within the rain
there's like a song
Knocks the window pane
crystal clear beads
Makes a tuneful sound
like from xylophone
Sound of mystical bell
down with the wind
As with the bagpipe
The symphonic sound
like a serenade
In a balmy night
to a person
THERE ARE SO MANY WAYS THAT YOU DESCRIBED THE GENTLENESS OF THE RAIN WHICH WE OVERLOOK SOMETIMES NICE POEM NICE RAIN
Nice touch well painted...
nice, gentle, awesome, lulls me into sleep
This is absolutely beautiful. One of the best I have red on this site.
great lyrical verses melodiously well presented about the rain, nice, nice, nice
Very nice poem. Rain is truly amazing.
You really like rain sir. The way it calms your soul. This one reminded me that every thing that God created is wonderful. It just depends on how we all look on things. Thank you sir.
For someone who is not a professional writer you are prolific, and these are enjoyable. I like the way you chose your subjects from nature. Please read mine – Rain - also - We the Unencumbered – Adeline
wow! Mr Bearis! a short, simple and yet lyrical that can lulled me into sleep. Such a good piece, i feel like hearing the rain whispering peace with each lines. I love the way you interpret the rain. I love rain!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
I Love this poem, it really cool and cold like gentle rain...I give you 10 coz i like this so much, amusing tones! _Unwritten Soul