' Gentle Rain ' Poem by Ency Bearis

' Gentle Rain '

Rating: 2.9


From within the rain
there's like a song
creatively
rhyming

Knocks the window pane
crystal clear beads
steadily
trickling

Makes a tuneful sound
like from xylophone
gracefully
playing

Sound of mystical bell
down with the wind
conjointly
blending

As with the bagpipe
in harmony
daintily
piping

The symphonic sound
like a serenade
joyfully
singing

In a balmy night
to a person
cozily
dreaming


(2011)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Claudia Krizay 31 August 2011

This is absolutely beautiful. One of the best I have red on this site.

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Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. 03 September 2011

nice, gentle, awesome, lulls me into sleep

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Eyan Desir 14 September 2011

Nice touch well painted...

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 12 October 2011

THERE ARE SO MANY WAYS THAT YOU DESCRIBED THE GENTLENESS OF THE RAIN WHICH WE OVERLOOK SOMETIMES NICE POEM NICE RAIN

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Unwritten Soul 22 October 2011

I Love this poem, it really cool and cold like gentle rain...I give you 10 coz i like this so much, amusing tones! _Unwritten Soul

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Genful Sorebell 25 June 2015

great lyrical verses melodiously well presented about the rain, nice, nice, nice

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Aditi Khandelwal 10 November 2011

Very nice poem. Rain is truly amazing.

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Angel Layl 29 October 2011

You really like rain sir. The way it calms your soul. This one reminded me that every thing that God created is wonderful. It just depends on how we all look on things. Thank you sir.

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Adeline Foster 24 October 2011

For someone who is not a professional writer you are prolific, and these are enjoyable. I like the way you chose your subjects from nature. Please read mine – Rain - also - We the Unencumbered – Adeline

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yellowbell alamanda 24 October 2011

wow! Mr Bearis! a short, simple and yet lyrical that can lulled me into sleep. Such a good piece, i feel like hearing the rain whispering peace with each lines. I love the way you interpret the rain. I love rain!

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