Spring Haiku 1 Comments

This works. Haiku is difficult to pull off convincingly. Less is more is much more. This is really good.

The transitions between seasons is in reality gradual. But often one experiences it as a special moment in time, like a hit by a sudden scent....... well done

Are you sure you're not Japanese? Your rapport with haiku is exceptional. Subtle and elegant. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

A beautiful haiku on the effective coming of spring.

..........................evocative Lynn, well done. Warmly, Jerry

Wonderful haiku, Lynn, like a capsule full of meanings and wonders. Regards Naseer

short but sweet lynn ♥ §♥ shawnee♥ §♥

Very delicate and sensitive work Lynn. Well done.