Spring Haiku 1 Poem by Lynn Kincade

Spring Haiku 1

Rating: 5.0


An elusive scent
The ghost of winter falters
On one plum blossom

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rory Hudson 31 August 2009

Very delicate and sensitive work Lynn. Well done.

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Shawnee Gonzalez 31 August 2009

short but sweet lynn ♥ §♥ shawnee♥ §♥

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 31 August 2009

Wonderful haiku, Lynn, like a capsule full of meanings and wonders. Regards Naseer

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Martin O'Neill 23 January 2012

This works. Haiku is difficult to pull off convincingly. Less is more is much more. This is really good.

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Goran Gustafsson 21 September 2009

The transitions between seasons is in reality gradual. But often one experiences it as a special moment in time, like a hit by a sudden scent....... well done

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Alison Cassidy 05 September 2009

Are you sure you're not Japanese? Your rapport with haiku is exceptional. Subtle and elegant. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Obinna Eruchie 01 September 2009

A beautiful haiku on the effective coming of spring.

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Jerry Hughes 01 September 2009

..........................evocative Lynn, well done. Warmly, Jerry

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