Wednesday, December 9, 2009

Springtime Dreams. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Scooping up dropped wings of unused fantasy
I contest the rest of winter,
.................................................and let spring
Declare war on same dark hourlong days, rank with
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Ben Gieske 11 December 2009

I really like all the images and words and the choice of words. Very pleasing to read and worth rereading slowly to savor all the meaning.

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Carol Gall 09 December 2009

words i can imagine as you wrote spring sneaking back in 10

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Deborah Cromer 09 December 2009

Excellent! Below freezing? Artic chill? I was warmed up by your new poem! Very welcoming to read what you have written on springtime. Debbie

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I wish i could have given the poem a vote of 1 million. thsi poem is so fitting, especially since tomorrow it woudl be freezing.. I hate winter! but i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee spring and Fay's writing.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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