Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Tuesday, November 13, 2018

Square Poems 17: Spider Acrostic Comments

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Some of them have poison,
Producing painful bites.
I could do without them
During those sleepless nights.
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Kim Barney
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Kelly Kurt 14 November 2018

An eight line/syllable square may have been more appropriate for a spider poem. : -)

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Kim Barney 14 November 2018

Ha ha ha! You have a point there. Too bad the word SPIDER only has seven letters. Maybe I could add another 'eye' and give the spider two eyes: SPIIDER

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Kim Barney 14 November 2018

I accidentally sent my reply when it wasn't yet finished. I was going to add: But then, spiders don't have two eyes; they have eight eyes as well as eight legs.

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wes vogler 13 November 2018

This is good carry on lad I am having a bad day destroyed first two attempts

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Kim Barney 14 November 2018

Thanks, Wes. I hope your day improves.

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Kim Barney

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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