Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Srping Is Here Comments

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non-stop sneezing
water dripping from
eyes red and bulged
blocked nostrils adding
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indira babbellapati
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This is in contrast to my poem of the same title. Your title says SRPING. Is it with a purpose?

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Raju Baruah 12 April 2010

Oh that's from a different point of view... Thanks for giving a different test...

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Raju Baruah 12 April 2010

Oh that's from a different point of view... Thanks for giving a different test...

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Leonard Dabydeen 01 April 2010

ha! ha! so u thought for a moment 'spring is here' only for the birds and the bees... then realize spring cleaning is a chore, with non-stop sneezing... great allergy time, too. tell u what...i read your poem with a smile, and almost had an...ach-ooo.... and for my friend, Sridevi...why should we consider 'spring overrated' when there is endless joy to behold...before spring takes flight again. thnx for sharing.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 31 March 2010

spring accompanied by spring cleaning...and its non stop sneezes all the way.....a different kind of tribute to the overrated season...thank you

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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