Stand With Rose Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Stand With Rose



When mild air touches
Her presence reaches
Reminds me of her stay
I find the day in beautiful way

She has something special
I feel it as human
So much caring
And herself ready with offering

When she is around
I have always found
The spread of fragrance
From flower by chance

I breathe her
With wide eyes but sans fear
She always consoles
With her charming smile

I am reminded of world
'So lovely' as has been told
When will I find her?
Stand with rose in hand as sweet offer

Tuesday, November 4, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 November 2014

When mild air touches Her presence reaches

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

EXCELLENT WHEN I WILL FIND HER nice Engineer Liaqat Ali Khan24 minutes ago good 5 Nov

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

Comment +1....... sean marshall23 minutes ago great piece of work and i wouldn't change anything about it. clear meaning and a nice odd pattern that i enjoyed. thank you for sharing and keep on writing Comment +1 5 Nov

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

interesting Samantha Cyborski20 minutes ago I really like how this poem flows. It's beautiful 9 hours ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2014

welcome Shamenaz Shaikh and Rajani Champaneri like this 3 mins · Unlike · 1 1 hour ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2014

Comment +1....... sean marshall23 minutes ago great piece of work and i wouldn't change anything about it. clear meaning and a nice odd pattern that i enjoyed. thank you for sharing and keep on writing Comment +1 1 hour ago by hasmukh amathalal | Reply

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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