Star Signs. Poem by Fay Slimm

Star Signs.

Rating: 5.0


Today I am told
All my personal goals
Will be met.
They say
Love will flow freely, yet
I will show more
Anger, and must restore
Positive vibes
Or signs alter by taking
Good luck away.


Some truth has to be found
In these profound
Predictions, which already
Attract steady
Belief in the omens of stars.
They say
If I dutifully
Work to achieve beauty.
Wealth too will come
Before day is done.


I say
Maybe the signs just forget
To say how ready
Credulity must become
To believe some
Of these wild wonderful
Things, but it's fun
To imagine today
Could end that way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fred Babbin 27 March 2010

Good thought well expressed

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Tsira Goge 08 January 2010

it's fine poem, Fay...All the same is funny a prediction... Our city horoscoper, always adds him ending words: who is warned, is the armed...10.. Tsira

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Stephen Stirk 08 January 2010

Here Here! . I suppose half the fun is in dreaming and imagining that things will go right for us. Not so the young man who won 2 million pounds on the lottery, and has just been found dead. A thoughtful piece. I hope you are getting my comments Fay, as (like a lot of us) I appear to be having trouble posting? Best Regards Steve

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Carol Gall 08 January 2010

star signs i hope that it comes true oh if u come into money lol sharing is good lol 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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