Wednesday, December 17, 2008

Stardust Nectar. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unbelievably bright, the moon tonight
Gleams lavishly full. Mysterious balloon
Consumes my feverish mind with roomful
Of cocooning, shimmering light. I pull
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Fay Slimm
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Wow. Now thats the definition and expression of passion. loved it Leslie

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Chuck Petz 21 December 2008

Ah love.! I dream to know the unknowable. Intricate and lovely.

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Bob Blackwell 20 December 2008

We saw my love and I, the moon, Venus the evening star, and Jupiter all in line, just the other night, it was such a special moment, we had to embrace and kiss. Fay i think you must have been there, judging from this poem. Bob

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Tia Maria 17 December 2008

'Floating clouds blanket us, obligingly. We sip the nectar of stardust, and rise' ..... lost in space after reading this - Great passionate poetry: -)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 17 December 2008

The moon and stars, what passion you are... Andy 10

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Ency Bearis 17 December 2008

amazing passionate journey..swirling in blissful feeling..lovely poem...10 Ency Bearis

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Kris Smith 17 December 2008

Lady your cup runneth over your cyber lover a very fortunate person 10+++++ Chris

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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