Starlight. Poem by Mae Bonnin

Starlight.

Rating: 4.0


As you lean down to kiss me, you cant see what your missing.
Its hard to know of your every move.
Swimming through an endless sky,
I watch as you pass by.
Someday, i'll climb a ladder to join you with your happy tune.

I'll look down with omnicient eyes, see people hurrying by.
And i'll wonder if i haste that way too.

And children crying in the night,
I'll send down dreams to quit their plight.
As they settle in, turning out their light.

And hungry people in the streets,
Will they have enough to eat?
Or will it be another scrapping feast?

To the men in bloody hillsides,
Do they have time to look high?
Can they see you fill your cup,
taking in the very least?

Tomorrow comes another day.
Darkness won't you keep at bay?
Starlight watch over us,
and keep the demons far away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matt Mooney 13 May 2010

A poem that's full of light and I like it.. Could you explain the metaphor of the star filling a cup?

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Jean Dament 25 January 2010

I like how you incorporated the plight of humans with the starlight looking on. Nicely done. Another poem that flows naturally. Spiritsong

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Leah Ayliffe 21 January 2010

Once again; BEAUTIFUL love your writing style

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