Starry Night Poem by britt jack

Starry Night

Rating: 5.0


I gazed up at you all night
It's that I felt as if you were my only friend
When I fell out of it
I came to you to make it better
I don't need to look beautiful
or be another person around you
you sense my soul for what it is
oh star oh star
come to me give me happiness
be my night sky when I have no one else
Your figure doesn't exist
how I deeply wish to lay my head on your stomach
feel your warm on a summer night
but I'm ashamed to know that can never happen
Another wish passed by with a blink

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Sabo 27 December 2009

I like the way you write, very melodic.

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Shekhar Joshi 07 July 2009

beautiful one................sweet but supposedly impossible longing........... nicely written...... ;)

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 07 July 2009

So beautiful. Your verses flow with galactic bliss and the words take one to flight.

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