Tuesday, December 25, 2007

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Start with a smile for everybody
Everybody wants a reason to be happy
Happy is the gentleman that receives a yes
Yes! from that beautiful girl whose eyes shine
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Maria Jose Cid Velazquez
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Ying Escalona 26 December 2007

the sequence is great, it connects the end to rhe new start..graet start in the end...kiss

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Ezekiel Valdez 26 December 2007

That was beautifully written poem, I liked the message and loved that flow and constution of it, Thank you for the enjoyable read, Peace

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