Seema Jayaraman

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Starving Gold - Poem by Seema Jayaraman

Fiery Explosions
Agitated aqua crimson
-Starving goldfish
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Seema Jayaraman, Mumbai,5Nov2015

Topic(s) of this poem: fish

Form: Haiku

Comments about Starving Gold by Seema Jayaraman

  • (11/16/2015 9:36:00 PM)

    I have goldfish I feed them every other day
    and that's what they do...nice
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  • (11/6/2015 1:00:00 AM)

    lovely haiku I can see them fighting over the feed
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/5/2015 6:01:00 PM)

    Crimson is agitated here with thought filling sharing with fiery explosions. Very wise and interesting poem shared with tiny lines. Nice sharing...10 (Report) Reply

    Seema Jayaraman (11/5/2015 6:10:00 PM)

    Its amazing the beauty and power these tiny creatures pack in a small aquarium. Tganks

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 5, 2015

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