Starving Gold Poem by Seema Jayaraman

Starving Gold

Rating: 5.0


Fiery Explosions
Agitated aqua crimson
-Starving goldfish
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Seema Jayaraman, Mumbai,5Nov2015

Thursday, November 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fish
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manonton Dalan 16 November 2015

I have goldfish I feed them every other day and that's what they do...nice

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Loke Kok Yee 06 November 2015

lovely haiku I can see them fighting over the feed yhanks-10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2015

Crimson is agitated here with thought filling sharing with fiery explosions. Very wise and interesting poem shared with tiny lines. Nice sharing...10

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Seema Jayaraman 05 November 2015

Its amazing the beauty and power these tiny creatures pack in a small aquarium. Tganks

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