Sunday, November 27, 2016

'State Of Mind' Comments

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Words cannot console me.. for the love I live without...
As I finally lay to rest.. the dreams that were in doubt,
For today you finally told me.. what my heart already knew...
But had to hear the words myself.. coming straight from you,
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steve griffin
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Phyllis Strong 27 November 2016

I enjoyed reading this poem. Respectfully, I see one change you need to make. “You should know your not alone..” The “your” here, should be you’re, as in you are…. We all make errors.

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