Wednesday, May 17, 2017

Statue In The Park Comments

Rating: 5.0

the statue in the park must come down
it recalls a darker time of war
it is a bitter memory
it blocks forgiveness
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 19 May 2017

I just read your comment. Its removal is symbolic of a step forward, a break from the haunting past. I also must add this poem is very well-structured. Its balance n rhythm is wonderful.

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Barry Middleton 19 May 2017

I look forward to seeing what they put in its place. I think MLK would be a great choice. Thanks for the comment.

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Nosheen Irfan 19 May 2017

A very thought-provoking write, reflective of your beautiful soul. Your anti-war stance inspires the readers. Indeed, a statue that glorifies an era of war and slavery is not worth having. A great piece. A super 10.

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Barry Middleton 17 May 2017

Last night, this offensive monument to slavery was removed from my ancestral neighborhood in new Orleans. Five generations of the living and the dead no longer will be haunted by General Beauregard.

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