The strenght of the man isn’t in the width of his shoulders
It’s in the width of his arms that circle you.
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WOW! ! ! this is an awesome poem! ! ! You are very smart, wise! ! ! N.N, .
a very simple and straightforward poem dripped in honey sugar
I think, the last couplet sums up the strenth of a man. Lovely write. CP
This is an absolutely wonderful write. The message was clear and beautiful. I think this is one of the best things I have read here. GW62
Fantastic piece sweet, ........you have such a wonderful way of expressing it's so soft and tender...your verses simply melt leaving puddles of loveliness all over the page........I think you're great 10++ Best of Health & Happiness Jon
The strength of a man is isn't measured from his physical attributes but his worthwhile living in this world. His greatness is qualified by; how responsible he is to his family, society, religious community and to his country....great poem my friend, you have expressed your views so innocently....10/10
This is a very lovely poem, in two liners, expressing the innocence and deep feelings of a woman, seeing how her man should be. Thanks for sharing.10
10++. I am adding this to my fav poems list.