Tuesday, November 7, 2017

Stepmother Comments

Rating: 4.8

father!
how can you, in our lives allow a serpent?
my being here at home changed
I am treated like a mere servant.
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Tsireledzo Masindi
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Darwin Henry Beuning 22 March 2018

Tsireledzo, LOVE is blind, how else can someone explain being married to a Beast! I rate a 10.

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Masindi T.B 24 March 2018

Thanks for good comment and please check out my other poems too

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 01 December 2017

Very touching poem story shared in here.....If dad sees it, probably he will act otherwise

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Masindi T.B 24 March 2018

THANKS. your comments are always positive and inspiring and so are your writings.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2017

In this poem the stepmother doesn't love the boy, on the other hand she treats him as sevant and does abuse him. It is really painful. Dear Tsireledzo you have so touchingly and astutely inscribed this event. It may be quoted.... father! how can you, in our lives allow a serpent? my being here at home changed I am treated like a mere servant. I know in her you saw an angel but how can she be one when she doesn't know the lord's temple. I hate home because of all this abuse She hits me, he's a bad boy that's her excuse. We were happy before she came, dad Now she's here and am always sad. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10

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Tsireledzo Masindi 09 November 2017

thanks for taking time to read my poem and giving a great comment

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Tsireledzo Masindi

Tsireledzo Masindi

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