Tuesday, July 17, 2007

Still Life Comments

Rating: 2.8

The Marlborough umbrella stands upright
red and white falling in rhythmic triangles
of light across the top half of tight spiked cloth.
The shining brown handle counter poised
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David Taylor
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Marci Made 17 July 2007

Vivid and excellent descriptions and the title is great for what you've written...I even remember those umbrellas, Marlboro ones, though haven't seen one in awhile.Seem to have disappeared, perhaps because in the states there is barely a place left where those who smoke can...Hope they don't get rid of the fire extinguishers while there at it...........keep writing and reading.......marci.xo

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Patricia Gale 17 July 2007

Splendid imagery, a well painted piece...

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