Renee Marie

Freshman - 709 Points (Danbury, CT USA)

Still Soft - Poem by Renee Marie

My journey
knows to seek falling water.
Still, soft, sensual inside centering;
she floats in a deep sleepy state
with crystal-clear awareness.
Satisfaction holds eyes closed.
Face glows tipped skyward
inviting sunbeams to carress
the tinest wounds
through floods of mysterious
balmy warmth.
Speechless,
still, soft, sensual inside centering;
she interprets the language of roses.
Bold, blood-red roses ramble free 'round
and 'round her fountain feet
and all that she needs is here.


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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (11/9/2007 10:23:00 AM)


    lovely poem as coursed through imagery in unique way, well penned thnks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 16, 2004

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 17, 2010


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