Renee Marie

Freshman - 709 Points (Danbury, CT USA)

Spring Is Coming - Poem by Renee Marie

I was simply where I had to be today,
nothing more and plenty less than my best.
I'm a bit sick with fermenting dreams souring my smile.
I was where I had to be today; auto-pilot got me there
and landed me safely back to bed, holding a warm bowl of ‘Chicken Noodle 'I Love You' and
'Everything Will be Okay' and
this spring I will garden again,
alone.

© Reneé Marie

Topic(s) of this poem: alone, dreams, free mind, spring

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Spring Is Coming by Renee Marie

  • Chinedu Dike (6/3/2018 3:55:00 PM)


    Well thought out piece of poetry written with conviction. Thanks for sharing Renee. (Report) Reply

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  • Laurie Van Der Hart (4/7/2017 1:13:00 PM)


    Hello Renée! Like this one. Can identify wirh it although one can never know all a poem means to the poet. I like your style. I am also curious as to how and why people pop in to read our poems. I'll tell you how I found you - homepage. And my real name is the same as yours! (Report) Reply

  • (1/8/2016 10:44:00 AM)


    Great poem, Where I needed to be today. If only we all could be just where we needed to be. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (10/15/2015 10:49:00 PM)


    wonderful hopes you have described and porteayed. i like this poem very much. tony (Report) Reply

    Renee Marie (10/15/2015 11:11:00 PM)

    Thanks so much, Tony! What made you pop-in? I am always curious as to how / why someone finds us in a tiny, little corner of the web...

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 24, 2004

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 28, 2018


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