Friday, October 3, 2008

Stolen Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

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the photograph

lies
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Dónall Dempsey
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Original Unknown Girl 07 October 2008

Sigh.... this is so very beautiful. Donall I don't know how you do it but you do it so very well... this little poem seems effortless but it is so heavy with beautiful emotion and imagery. I love it... You are fab you are! HG: -) xx

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Scarlett Treat 06 October 2008

The mind sees the photograph, before the camera is ever, ever clicked, and thus, the picture is forever mine, scarlet(t) lips, green apple! SNAP! Now you are mine, Forever.

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Onelia Avelar 06 October 2008

A little bit nostalgic but not too much. Fortunately the melancholy and pessimism do not thrive well in your poems, maybe because of the wind :) or who knows, but the poems bring always optimism and sweet not bitter nostalgia. That is what I like!

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Janice Windle 03 October 2008

Beautiful picture of a picture that never was realised except in your memory. The thief that stole the camera couldn't steal the memory.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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