in the end life is swept clean
like the polished stones
of a spring water creek
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A soul within a stone. It is an interesting metaphor and makes sense to me. A stone gazes upon a stone is difficult to read, yet comforting at the same time. Beautiful metaphorical write.
Thank you. When death looms one call feel quite numb. Like stone. And those spring creeks of my childhood hold a special meaning for me.
Very powerful write the metaphors bittersweet I enjoyed the cool waters of the poem after all death is but a heart beat away and we go on the journey alone 10++
A great conclusion of one's life.In an icon the feeling we get from this world!