Storm Poem by Annabel Cruz

Storm

Rating: 5.0


I saw your face above me
In a strange November sky
Your stern features contrast
To the softness floating by.
A streak of lightning
Slapped you
With a fading, crooked smile
The burning white impression
Still frozen in my eyes
But gone –
As quickly as it came
And leaving, only rain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 16 February 2011

Wow, this is really something good. Excellent use of nature and metaphor, I like it!

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