Sunday, August 28, 2011

Storm Comments

Rating: 5.0

the old man stirs the fire,
finding eternity in the ashes...
an unknown breeze ruffles the curtains,
as fire enters through the window.
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Eric Cockrell
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Smoky Hoss 13 November 2011

Superb imagery, with a grace of movement that stirs the soul of the reader. Great stuff here.

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