Stranger Of Nightmare Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Stranger Of Nightmare

Rating: 4.5


Curve of flow when dichotomized
moves through the dynamics eccentric
sandwiched in-between plates spatial
sword hanging over the crownless head

the two bodies of spirals by living stones
trailing half beaten by the songs of illusion
when flecks into the void by the disillusion
dying pity around seems gardens of pain

tears still fall across the mortal dew
remembering the trembling joy behind
when rocked up by the tendril of age torn
beckoning beneath the fragile hedge plant

love survives limpid dappled gray of dishonor
the dazing echoes being cleaved by the cliff
the crowd follows the upstream yet forward
cadence still walks meandering by direction

breeze when ambles by the mirror as quivering
standing speechless across the lamp post
shadow still smacks of sticking to deep night
yet looking lonely into the street of milestones

the age lashes out the pride on the dark corner
before the luscious green of the youth unlaid
feeling intense latching on to the mortal breath
swooning the subtle whispers as coins antiquated

dream seems listless by the square criss crossed
when bitterly stung by the stranger of nightmare
smiles when defrays the brutality by the sunset
apprehends stranger by mid summer `s night mare

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 29 April 2008

breeze when ambles by the mirror as quivering standing speechless across the lamp post very poignant, here the relational nature undercuts itself …the diachronic is pictured by nature imagery…. melancholy fills the lines in a pleasure pain….., tis now the very witching time of night when loved one appears as strangers…….

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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