I can't take the stress
I can't pass this test
Tell me, why am i trying to impress?
Im sick of this game
Its makes me so lame
Im never at ease
When you are near me
I try to impress
and it makes a great mess
I screw it all up..
Man.. im such a shmuck
12-16-09
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Tiffany - Stress because of tests is a Universal Dilemma. We are all faced with tests which we want to pass - and sometimes have to pass - to progress to the next phase in our life. There is always someone (Peers - Family - Friends) we are trying to impress - and in fact they sometimes make matters worse (V 2) . V 3 is a universal cri de coeur. 'I try to impress and it makes a great mess - I screw itall up - Man I'm uch a shmuck'. Good poem good structure. Love you in Poetry - JOHN.