Tiffany ThePirate


Yell - Poem by Tiffany ThePirate

When you yell at me
can't you see?
Your only making it worse
Your making me hate you more easily

I understan
I screw things up
Im only human.
You need to see
You yelling
Its killing me

Stop it! !
Give it a break! !
There's only so much
This girl can take

I'm sick of this
If i could i would run away
Your making it hard
To face a new day

Just stop yelling
I get the point dad
Now stop yelling
your making me mad.

12-2-09


Comments about Yell by Tiffany ThePirate

  • (12/6/2009 11:55:00 PM)


    well expressed thoughts and feelings...niceli done dear! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/6/2009 5:36:00 PM)


    People express their emotions in many different forms.....some yell and some use vices to deal with what bothers them. I'm glad to see that you write. (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2009 5:50:00 AM)


    You should show him this poem maybe lol..
    Well when you are small you are small
    just be strong one day...
    no one will yell at you
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  • (12/5/2009 9:16:00 AM)


    not a clue about the other comments ok tiffany yelling is a hatefu thing to do to
    anyone i know how you feel i used to imagine putting duct tape on those mouths
    just be with yourself 10
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  • John Knight (12/5/2009 9:02:00 AM)


    Hi Tiffany - Who's yellin' at a nice girl like you Angel - it's sure not me - I love you! You seem to be going through a phase were you are letting all your angst out and getting back on a higher plane. This is my third of you mega poems i have commented on and I have ut you at the top of my Prayer List - AMEN. Things always get better as you get older (I should know) keep lookig up and lokng forward. Keep on writing it gives us a glimpse into the theings that bug you and we can share them with the LORD on your behalf - OK. Again i have scored a TEN parceque j'aime POESIE DU COUER je't'aime. Love you in poetry JOHN. (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 8:43:00 AM)


    I think alot of us remember those days...love of the parents..then again they made you feel like you we're a problem to mess with...in the way..like your a child and they think you should be an adult and know it all....blah...beautiful poem Tiffany..thanks... ~^..^ (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 8:31:00 AM)


    I hated the yelling over time I got over it.... Nope i shut myself out from society

    my self and lost all my friends. All I know is remembering through this so-called tragedy of my own personal life. Is that there is no other issue then our family relations.... forgive them who yell at you, and let them deal with me
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  • (12/5/2009 8:29:00 AM)


    comment me back so I remember wher I rhyme slow where did my mind go

    I threw where I lost woah..... I had to lose first I am sorry I play no games either

    jack a sparrow you have found that there is no beef with halk now....

    no pirate look how I write not posting all of this but for you go ahead and do it
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2009



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