Ketan Hukare

Rookie - 330 Points (24 September 1997 / Thane (W))

Stupid Cloud - Poem by Ketan Hukare

He came out of moonlight
And knocked at my door,
Begged for some stories.
I said, 'I'm done. No more.'

He hung his head in despair
Yet his eyes twinkled in dark.
Couldn't help but let my guard down
And I began to hark.

He looked straight at my soul
As he heard my stories of pain.
He cried all night
And people called it rain.

They called him stupid,
But he's never been so sane.
One day he'll come back to you
And you will beg for his rain.

Topic(s) of this poem: cloud, rain, sorrow, stories

Form: Verse

Comments about Stupid Cloud by Ketan Hukare

  • Gajanan MishraGajanan Mishra (6/11/2017 8:50:00 PM)

    cried all night, Ketan babu, and write good poetry, I wish all good. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/11/2017 8:41:00 PM)

    poetry has no place for unrecognized words. the suipid word is not apprecoated.. good attempt...10

    The cloud may knock
    and rock
    the entire places
    and smilingly bless

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 11, 2017

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 8, 2017

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