Sorrow Poem by Ketan Hukare
Sorrow
There was silence in my heart
And my eyes began to weep
My hands on my cheek
But my knees were far too weak
To stand Straight apart
Or I would fall in the deep
I stand on a cliff
Should I take a leap?
But there's a silence that
My mind would never get
Because it feels that
My sorrow is worth forget
My song is no good
Worthless to bet.
My eyes kept closed because
Fire is making them wet!
So I walk alone in the rain
I swim in the river of pain!
My mind, full of thoughts
It thinks all lame
I feel its the time to go
To the place from where I came
Closing my eyes forever
Sleeping in the tearful rain!
I feel the Sorrow in your words, I hope that life smiles upon you.
Beautifully written Ketan for such youth. Keep up the great work.
I do like the way that you express the feeling-I cannot do so; thereby, wishing you to teach me about that ;) Keep writing, Hukare!
Expressive and truly impressive poem it is Master Ketan. Make yourself optimistic and think beyond the immediate circles. Your sorrow will soon fade out. All the best ahead
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 12:50:57 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I stand on a cliff Should I take a leap? My eyes kept closed because Fire is making them wet! I swim in the river of pain! These are the points i collected from your beautiful poem. Thank you for your thoughts, imaginations and the brilliance of your mind A great poem. Wonderful expressions in imagination….. pain you have expressed very well my dear poet. Thank you. tony