Ketan Hukare

Rookie - 274 Points (24 September 1997 / Thane (W))

Spellbound - Poem by Ketan Hukare

My eyes and limbs were tightly tied
I was lying in a dark place.
I tried a thousand times to be free
To uncover my hidden face.

A hundred times did I shout for help
But nobody turned out.
Nobody even tried to help
Although they all heard my shout.

And alone I lay there, helpless!
Negative thoughts entered my mind.
Everyone enjoyed their feast
And I lay still there behind.

I was habitual of the noisy footsteps
Some kicked, some just passed by.
just like any other footsteps' noise I heard,
I felt someone was near by.

Just then my limbs felt loose
And I could open my eyes
It was you who came like an albatross
So good, so wise!

You came along and waved your hand.
You tossed my jinx and brightened this place.
You stood before me and smiled
That smile brightened my face.

You are like a north star
You show me the way.
You taught me to live and give,
You taught me not to give away.

You looked at me,
You saw my suffering,
You waved your hand,
And you changed everything!

You waved your hand around
You raised me off the ground
You are too magical indeed
You left me spellbound!

Comments about Spellbound by Ketan Hukare

  • Theodore Tilmoth (3/4/2013 2:43:00 AM)

    If you let the girl you fall for read this, she will fall for you then- I'm very sure! (Report) Reply

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  • Waseem A Malla (2/2/2013 6:32:00 AM)

    whosoever was in your mind while writing this poem, i appreciate your art of putting it into words so beautifully (Report) Reply

  • Babatunde Aremu (1/30/2013 6:21:00 AM)

    Good poem. This is an appreciation of God-sent messenger who came to deliver us from shackles. Keep writing, I lke this (Report) Reply

  • Mohammad Skati (1/28/2013 10:42:00 PM)

    It's a great and sweet poem.I encourage you to write more and more.Good luck. (Report) Reply

  • Vivek Tiwari (1/27/2013 8:54:00 AM)

    I hope this poem has some idea for someone endeared for you. The ideas is really awesome and lucid. Love the idea. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 20, 2013

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