Aminath Neena

Veteran Poet - 1,582 Points (Male')

Sublime Bliss - Poem by Aminath Neena

Standing across the bridge
gazing into an oblong ridge
of the deep mesmerizing kind
I am lost-
Lost within the musk


Of the soft brown steep
beneath the river so deep
wading through liquid fire
my heart ignites-
Ignites to pure lust


In the distance an enchanting melody
chants with our symphony
My feet slips
and I drown-
Drown ever so willingly


you so absolutely tantalize
expertly mesmerize
In chocolate candy frost
that I inhale-
Inhale the sweet remedy


of the green green grass
obscuring yester years grey grey canvas
brushing so tender against my heart
that I break apart-
Break apart from the kiss


The gliding stream is mine to luxuriate
together with the moon light's affiliate
Sharing my joy
and I start to cry-
Cry out in sublime bliss

Churning light sparks to flute
promising to conceive its radiant fruit
the essence of our love
Seems so intense-
Intense enough to defy

Every negative illusion
with such vibrant gratification
and all that is left-
Left Is just
An exalted deep s-i-g-h! ! ! !

Topic(s) of this poem: happiness


Comments about Sublime Bliss by Aminath Neena

  • Chuy AmanteChuy Amante (7/4/2014 9:55:00 AM)

    NOthing beats Crying out in sublime bliss...
    Thanks, that I choose to never miss!
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  • Chuy AmanteChuy Amante (7/4/2014 9:55:00 AM)

    NOthing beats Crying out in sublime bliss...
    Thanks, that I choose to never miss!
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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 4, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, July 4, 2014


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