Subliminal Betrayal Poem by Allenace Muchi

Subliminal Betrayal

Rating: 5.0


'What you don't know won't hurt you', indeed!
Don't attempt to confront me about it,
I told you before I have such a powerful instinct.
It never failed me!
I knew it!
I knew it!

You don't have to say it outloud!
I'll pretend I'm too occupied, I won't notice it!
So I may look like one!
And so you may believe I am
a fool

But don't forget!
You are not the only one
given the senses of a man!
I've got the brain too!
And You might not notice
that your pretension
is only begetting another of it's kind!



Do not think that never will I think the way you do!
Because no matter what you say how good you are!

You are still just a human like me!
nothing more, nothing less!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 01 July 2009

The finest emotions we are capable of are the mystic emotions and this poem rather dictates a true reality that one can even be hit with things one is unaware of.....10/10

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very true, nicely expressed, emotion painted across the canvis of poetry, nice poem

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