Subliminal Betrayal Poem by Allenace Muchi

Subliminal Betrayal

Rating: 5.0


'What you don't know won't hurt you', indeed!
Don't attempt to confront me about it,
I told you before I have such a powerful instinct.
It never failed me!
I knew it!
I knew it!

You don't have to say it outloud!
I'll pretend I'm too occupied, I won't notice it!
So I may look like one!
And so you may believe I am
a fool

But don't forget!
You are not the only one
given the senses of a man!
I've got the brain too!
And You might not notice
that your pretension
is only begetting another of it's kind!



Do not think that never will I think the way you do!
Because no matter what you say how good you are!

You are still just a human like me!
nothing more, nothing less!

Thursday, June 25, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,senses
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 01 July 2009

The finest emotions we are capable of are the mystic emotions and this poem rather dictates a true reality that one can even be hit with things one is unaware of.....10/10

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very true, nicely expressed, emotion painted across the canvis of poetry, nice poem

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