Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 335,555 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

Submissive - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

You are very submissive to me my love and,
We are like the hill and the valley living together;
So we can protect each other in any season on this love.

It should be a bit wet before you use it then,
It will be very lovely all day long.
It should be a bit soft before you eat it then,
You will love it forever!
For you are very submissive to my love.

You should leek it when it is very hard!
Then you will love eating it over and over agin;
For you are very submissive to my love and,
We are like the valley and the hill together always.


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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 5, 2010



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