Subsiding Pain Comments

i also really liked this one, very musical and very well captured feelings

The bleakness and the hopelessness are beautifully captured. But what I like is the emergence of the new moon with the pain... Gives hope... A beautiful poem!

Brilliant work, time a healer for all those wounds and pains, well composed good poem. wish a full moon and new dawn clear all those pains

Brilliant work, time can heal all those wounds and pains, wish a full moon and new dawn shine after all those pains, a well crafted poem with heartfelt lines.

Love your last line 'pain subsides in the new moon'. A powerful antidote to abandonment. Compassionate penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥