Success
I am not a success in the eyes of the world
I don't have a big mansion,
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''I am not a success in the eyes of the world'' so many of us can say the same, Lisy ;) Thanks for sharing
Well penned. It's the inner peace that matters, not the worldly gains. You have presented this concept beautifully.
An insightful depiction of the essence of success, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Lisy. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
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