We have moved apart:
husband-wife relationship is a failure.
We are sacrificing for our kids:
parents will never fail.
The boy kid's expression:
'I never feel alone but feel vacant'.
The girl kid's expression:
'I am secure, still I have had fear'.
When their parents bring them to a resort,
the kids ask for a home.
When their parents bring them to a restaurant,
the kids ask for a bowl of noodles.
When their parents meet them separately,
the kids ask for lap and roof together.
The kids grow in body-
mental growth is like a house of cards, not stone:
they need guns for self-protection!
Really it is very sad. Kids are getting way ward due to lack of parental love and protection. Very nice poem.
Lovely poem. Please parents swallow your pride and get back together for the sake of the kids. I like the 3rd verse most.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Separation is painful not just for two but for entire family. Your poem is heartfelt. Nicely written.5 stars